Of the 12 feedback sheets that were filled out for us the majority gave us 2 out of 3 stars, (it has potential). 9 of the 12 groups thought our work had potential. whilst the other 3 gave it only one star, (in need of serious work). No one gave us 3 stars, however we didn't really expect any 3 stars as we knew that we still had some work to do and because it was the only the first draft that we were showing.
A lot of people liked the camera angles that we used and the opening shot, a lot of people also liked the typography that we used and liked the idea of the paper and the titles however they feel that it could have been executed better. they also liked the the opening titles created an enigma- who was the character? what is he doing? and why?
The things that people feel that we need to work on our. smoother transitions between the shots, something we were aware that we needed to work on anyway. some people dislike the typography, that we have changed. some people also disliked the fact that we only used one location but we were also going to so that was not a problem for us. people are also saying that the casting was strange but that can be changed if we decide to by just changing the names shown in the sequence
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